Atlantis Code: Update
Well this was only fun for a little while. I shoulda seen it coming.
He had two Hot Ladies on the team of good guys. He was gonna feel the need to have them not get along (because character realism isn’t the point here, tension and release is). That particular subplot was not very believably written but merely annoying since the action rocked right along…. Until he decided they should really have it out.
Well when he did he blew it.
In storytelling and invention, an argument decided upon rather than arrived at is a real ball-dropper and basically since it got dropped, so has this book. I’d like to get back into it cuz it was really quite fun for a while there. Lots of great historical information and the dude can really write action. I’ve tried twice but the spell has been broken. I think.
COURTNEY TAYLOR-TAYLOR
